18. improved efficiency of work and reduced its expenses
19. initiated and carried out a research project to evaluate the trade market
20. served as an assistant manager in a world-famous chain store
21. supervised 6 person research team for 5 years
22. worked one year as a …
? 简历中涉及到的语法问题
1. 将所有第一人称代词从简历中拿掉（I, we, me, my）, 当然更不能用第三人称代词。
2. 冠词：简历当中不需要冠词，例如：应写retrained staff而不是retrained the staff
3. 助动词：简历当中不需要助动词，所以，应该写managed 而不是have managed
4. 动词：简历当中的所有主要动词全部用动词的过去式形式。
5. being性动词：简历中一律使用主动语态，不要出现am, is, are, were, was等词。
6. 时态转换：简历中的时态基本保持过去式，偶尔用一般现在式。
7. 复合句：在简历中少用复合句，将其拆成若干短小的句子，最多带一个从句，主句都是类似祈使句的样子——无主语
Self-statement（个人介绍----样本）
MY BACKGROUND
I was born in a small village of Shan Dong Province on April 4th, 1968. When I was young, my family was very poor, so I had to work to earn money to help my parents after class when I was in the middle school.
In 1986 I was admitted by University of International Business and Economics (or: UIBE) to pursue a bachelor degree in Economics. My major is accounting in Department of International Business Management. The undergraduate education gave me a wide range of vision and taught me how to cooperate with others. I developed several professional interests in Accounting, Finance, and International Trade.
The following eight-year working experience offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence. In 1990-1993, I worked as an assistant to funding manager in China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. In 1993-present, I was employed by China Kingdom Import and Export Corporation to be the Manger of Financial and Accounting Division.
I do believe that with my hard early life, solid educational background and ample working experience, I would be an excellent student of you MBA program.
MY PERSONAL ACCOMPLISHMENT:
After graduating from UIBE, I was employed as the assistant to the funding manager by China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. After reading a lot of related files, and analyzing the overall funding situation of the corporation, I found that the loan policy was not been put into effect. So we have thousands of millions RMB loan with very high interest rate while a large amount of cash in bank with very low interest rate was idle. I reported this to my supervisor, and then we studied and revised the loan policy. This revision saved the corporation approximately RMB thirty millions yuan. In order to raise the funding effectiveness, after one year’s hard work, I developed the internal banking system within the corporation based on the actual funding supply and need of the different divisions and projects. This internal banking system made full use of the corporation’ funding resources, and due to this, I was highly praised by the president of the corporation.
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